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I really like this. The idea of Vergil showing up always seems to be a point of interest for people, especially regarding Nero. The two are so dissimilar it makes you wonder how the two would interact-or if Vergil would even want anything to do with him at all. I personally think you pulled Vergil off pretty well, not wanting anything to do with Nero.

I also think it was smart that Nero had that feeling of recognition but at the same time he remained very wary. He seems to keep his guard up a lot of the time.

I am curious as to how Dante would react knowing Vergil is still alive and Nero met him.

I will look forward to it if you continue it though I am also looking forward to more of AWYS and your 100 themes prompts. All of your writing intrigues me so getting more of it is always a good thing ;)
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RabidChimera Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the critique, and sorry it took me forever to say that. You will get more of something eventually, I'm just not sure what right now. I've been jumping from story to story lately.
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bitbyboth Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's all good. I've been terribly inactive myself lately :iconflinchplz:
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